On the fast track

Discussion in 'Black and White' started by djunclesam, Apr 25, 2014.

  1. djunclesam

    djunclesam FujiXspot Regular

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    Apr 9, 2014
    Ntherlands
    Was a bit bored in a long train ride and played a little bit with my fuji x100s.

    Usually I am not so into the long exposure stuff while photographing traffic or being inside a vehicle. But one way or the other, this photo kind of caught my attention and never made it into the trashcan. The dirtyness of the windows is visible through the picture but adds some extra dimension to the image for me.

    Am I right or should I just throw this one away... ;)

    Old:
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  2. GeoffM

    GeoffM FujiXspot Regular

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    Feb 12, 2013
    Queensland, Australia
    I like it too but I would lose the vignette, it detracts rather than adds to the overall image.


    Geoff
     
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  3. djunclesam

    djunclesam FujiXspot Regular

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    Apr 9, 2014
    Ntherlands
    I think you are right about the vignet. Put an update on with less vignetting. I think a little bit of falloff to the corners adds something to the picture so I did not eliminate it completely :D